heres a demo tell me wat yall think

yo im like a depraved slave
been rappin for 4 years have yet to get paid
who am i a rapper a result of wat the streets made
a common hustler and a stick up kid makin rappers dreams fade
im too hot and the rest of yall pests gettin killed like my flow is RAID
im a new species unleashed from the cage
burnin all of yall cats up like uv sun rays
in the street wit my click swingin bats on cats like Willie Mays
and i got a hook shot wit my guns like dr.jay
and yall can get Vokal like clothes from dr.jays
but beleive me you dont want these bullets sprayed
cus i leave clicks flushed like a full hand of spades


heres my battle link vs remixed illusion from X.l.G

iceman vs remixed illusion