Eki, you have some good potential man, keep elevating and you'll be good. You took this battle for sure, ripped apart the other n00b. One thing though. Don't use those brackets, that's a bit herbish man, don't mark your verse all up like that.
good battle.
vote on this when you reach 100, i need 1 more vote to close that shit.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=101199