check it .....heres the breakdown...
personals...Crooked that shit about reigh on your dick liked it...
punches...yea crooked had some ok shit too simplistic though dog up that shit...
flow....definatly crooked i couldn't barely read with all those bracts and dashes and shit.....fix that...
opener...really wasn't feelin that first line by eki no hate just thought it was a forced personal...
closer...hehe i did like Eki's closer though that was some good shit...you both got skill try get more creative ...one