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Over Weight
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IP:
I liked this topic,
all 3 of you had verry good verses,
on point, precise,
The flow, its stayed with each verse,
great vocabulary usage, multis
sometimes the vocab made it a little hard to understand,
If you look down the side of emerges verse,
the first letter of every line says,
MY INFLUENCE OVER YOU,
i found that very witty,
nice drops for all of you,
props
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