Flow on first verse is INSANELY sloppy, you sound like u got rocks in your mouth.

Hook - bad, add a "chorus" effect to it

second - omg, it gets worse..

*press stop*

second kids flow is just real awefull....first kid is somewhat there but not, needs to get the rocks out his mouth....

um...second cat is not good right now, elevate man, keep at it

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