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Old 12-26-03, 12:17 PM   #30
RythmicTendicies
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lol at the amount of replies..rarity....

anyway, it was a dope piece, your knowledge and use of vocab and wordplay was clearly apparent througout. It was never over or underused and it was played and spread out nice n' evenly.

Flow was smooth, could've used some more internals but meh.... was good enough. As for the concept, good imagery...just what i had expected:
!so this Glass Of Gin now symbolises me, ready to be downed
Forget Spoken Word I See Alcoholism as the future .. follow me now .."
- nice.

4/5 dope piece, nice to see something of this calibre posted in Open mic, deserves all the good critic you get.
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