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Old 12-26-03, 04:00 PM   #119
Ambitious
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This is the freestyle thread sonny....dont post pre-writtens
Shit half your punchlines are 10 times softer than 3 kittens
Now you watch me spittin, heart stops he's bittin', me livin'
T.U. beat tech who's he kidden? fool mafucka i be shittin
Wit tha simplist rhyme...i sit back and just crinkle ya rhymes
Talk about Joke? I merked your whole crew, yes even Smoke
Ya right long lines from throat, but ya flow is all outta hope
nothin left but you multies and vocab, but ya structure is so sad
try'ta keep lines even, talk rough but you think ppl beleive it?
Changed up scheemes so it's that easy ta beat yer ass clean
Cause when I'm lookin' at ya skill I start to see it's real Lean
Thin, down to da bone, thats all thats left you should go home
Only time you are what you say alone, is when you have a clone
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