Beat was nice... Quality was pretty good... But dog turn the vocals way down... its to loud... Flow is choppy, and barely on beat... off more then on. Lyrics werent really good. Rhymes were simple. You need more emotion and a way better flow... Practice your verse until you got it perfect then record it. And instead of reading it memorise it. It'll improve ya flow tons and your emotion will be better... Keep spittin...
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my bad I peeped the top track on the page not the one wit Meth.
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