Quality is shit... feelin this beat tho..
Rhyme scheme is good... Lyrics are alrite... Flow is choppy good but needs work... Sounds like ya tryin to squeeze to many syllables in a bar an its hurtin it... Try memorising it before you spit it... Voice is pretty good... at some points kinda sounded a bit like Pun... Keep spititn...
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