beat was ok....not that great......first emcee sounds like he's babbling words....almost mumbling....you need to fix your vocals and your delivery.....hook is cliche....in other words it's trash....and try editing and copying when you do your hooks...hook was also terrible..second emcee is just as horrible as the first one....lyrics from both emcees were garbage (my honest opinion).....both flows were choppy...definitely off flow like crazy throughout the whole song.....ya need more experience recording and definitely need experience in the production facility (lol)......nuff said....OnE





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