this is good shit man...by the passsion in both of your words, I can tell you are spitting stuff that is own your mind and basically asking us to answer the unsolved questions of your life that you are unable to understand...this is what I feel, truly makes a good emotional song, when you do not turn to an artist such as tupac for inspiration...but you already have everything you need in u...

Great work overall, I love it...espically since I can truly relate to it and understand both of your points of view. Overall, i give this...

8/10...great work both of you.