check i give this to chrit he killed it i mean your punches barely ryhmed there THOG...i'll still break it down though...
punches....chrit...
flow...chrit...
personals...meh...THoG..whatever...
structure...chrit...both kinda fucked...
wordplay/metas....chrit...
opener...chrit...
closer...chrit....
overall chrit no hate hit this up thanx one....

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