here i was trying to quote sections of your piece, but then i would have quoted it in its entirety. definately a piece that has no standout lines for its a standout piece...

structure fitting... transition and flow from different aspects in this relationship were smooth and easy to follow. a well rounded piece, which any reader can either relate to or appreciate for the honesty and straight forward approach. seems like you wrote heart-felt and not trying to appease readers... w/o absractions, to the point...

Bravo... keep contributing your pieces, def. an enjoyable read...

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