Fuck it, I'm gonna post my battle now and try to post by 12:00 PM EST...

I'm Divine-with-Scorn in Rhyming-Wars, Snap your Wrists so P_B's 'Timing's-Poor'/ -1
Twist your Spinal-Cord when I'll Punch your Teeth through your Cortex so your 'Mind-is-Torn'!/ -2
This is not a Passive-Contest but I'll Make you Grasp-the-Concept/ -3
Smashing your Face through the Monitor to Create a 'Graphic'-'Onset'!/ -4
Then Pounce-ThisYouth when I Cut your Joints-in-Two/ -5
and 'Stick my Fingers through your Eyes' to Give you my 'Point-of-View'!/ -6
I'll Sink-your-Clout you can Scream-and-Shout Until your Ink-Runs-Out/ -7
and Place your 'Brain Outside your Skull' so you can 'Think-this-Out'!/ -8
As I Split-Parts-With-War-Axes and Rip-Hearts-From-Thoraxes/ -9
This Bastard only Packs 'Raw Punches' when I Leave his 'Fists-Parked-in-Chloric-Acid'!/ -10
I'll Rearrange your Face like a Plastic-Surgeon/ -11
Using Sexual-Words-When I Violate this fag like a Catholic-Virgin!/ -12
Kid you Took-This-Fight-in-Haste now I'll leave you Shook-With-Life-Erased/ -13
Nobody's gonna 'Bite' your Verse because it Looks-Just-Like-it-Tastes!/ -14
Make you Appear on 'Ricki Lake' Lookin like a 'Battered-Wife'/ -15
The only Thing you'll 'Beat Me In' is a 'Race to the After-Life'!/ -16

you better send something back. this is prolly one of my best works of art

PS: I know its 16 lines, but just make it be 10-16. sorry. copy my lines if ya want.