The first part reminded me of this film i watched called 'Eve's Bayou'. About this little girl who kills her father (who she loves) out of rage that he 'touched' her sister. But as i kept on reading, i could see it'd a tainted and dark mind to write a piece like this and be talking about 'that'. And of course, if you are, then i congratulate you and slap myself.

Towards the middle it started to loose it's subtelty. Became more raw and blunt. Which i felt made it loose it's momentum a bit.

But then it got back into the rythm. And ended well.

Overall, though the middle a bit akward n all that, a resounding and telling piece.

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