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Old 12-27-03, 05:08 PM   #9
RythmicTendicies
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wtf are you two on about....

anyway, flow was pretty decent, liked the way the bars were the same length, good structure. Vocab needs to be slightly increased, was a little to basic n' simplistic for me, make it more complex n' deep.

Some good wordplay in here, nice.....3/5.

Hit my "Asesino" piece up please..thanks.
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