seen alot of this before from other cats, Id admit yours is one of the better of all of the ones i've seen... Like Word Play said though alot of the lines really held no meaning beyond the words. I fealt you did a niice job at creating meaning in the lines that did make sence though. I think I would focus on building this off one general topic next time though. I was feeling the vocab and the attempt. I will check out some of your other work when I get a chance to see what else you got...

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