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Old 12-28-03, 03:23 AM   #19
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Don't worry PaYcE these are all dick-ryding faggets...
As Tox pointed out you had ALOT more punches, and al of them came alot more harder...

Break-Down...

Flow - PaYce, was structured better, which made it flow better

Punches - PaYce, some were played by both cats, but i felt that PaYce had more and the ones he did have hit alot harder

Personals - PaYce, had alot more, and were alot better, Underated's were pretty lame and didn't form together to well..
suggestion payce you shouldn't have to explain your personals

Multies - Obviously PaYce, by his type of rhyme scheme, his rhyme scheme almost always guarantees him flow and multies. If your a newb take a close look and you'll see.

Vocab - Both were lacking on this, and need to elevate

Originality - Even, some of lines by both of you were played, but overall alright verses...

Over-All - PaYce murdered this bitch, Underated i don't know how you got that record, obviously dick-ryding, or that was a really shit verse...