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NuClearConCepts: Misplaced Love
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12-28-03, 03:38 AM
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this was alright....ya FLow WAs Nice man but ya Structure was Off ya seemed to Stretch some lines out......ya vocab and Wordplay was nice man could use some work though alround a nice piece.......
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