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12-28-03, 10:39 AM
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Damani-DaGrinch
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good rhyme structure ....ya flow was easy 2 follow....had a strong story....a few filler lines..but definitely a good piece...
ima have 2 give dis 1 2 thumbs up...
Damani-DaGrinch