I Would Breakitdown Verse By Verse But Im Gonna Have To Leave A Comment and not a N00b Breakdown Like ^ He just did..
Hmmm BOTH VERY NICE.... for your level.
But Your bars were both to stretched keep them tidy 2... nice punches.... best two lines
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like old-stoners.. ill make da 007 senile, through a memory lapse
to be retired no doubt, hip hops a concept this dick choker barely grasps
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blah this was the only decent line i could find you just keeped on goig on about shit no body unstands or cares about memory lapse?...
other hand..
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words seperate your hearts chambers, split the pulmonary veins,
expose your anemic brain, n the 'matter of facts' which it contains,
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after thaty^ lie i got bored rest were blah that as a solid punch
V= Double... because the other guy had weak punches very weak...