Thread: Chrit Vs Tox
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Old 12-28-03, 12:15 PM   #18
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LMMFAO...
You know you're an herb when not only can u not write a verse.. you also can't read or comprehend one.

Anyways..

Tox.. Your punches didn't connect to hard and you had basically an overall simple verse.. Nothing special.. Nothing clever.. Just your good old plain verse.

Chrit on the other hand had some nice metaphores.. good concepts, although could have been re-worded.. Hard hitting punches.. Only thing is you seemed to have forced it a bit and too many fillers.. The first line of every bar except 1 was filler.

But nonetheless.. Chrit came harder in all aspects of this battle.

Vote- Chrit.
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