Dropz one this one... but I mean really... where is the structure?

Neither of you are rhyming line for line or even every two lines... Dropz structure was better so he got my vote as I did see some semblance of rhyme at the end of line... It was weird to see this battle... I even went back to read the rules to see if there was something I missed... Anyways, Dropz is the victor in my opinion.