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Old 12-28-03, 03:46 PM   #14
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aight reign wiped the slate clean, the structure combined with the opener made it read easier, not just from the begining but the hole way threw.

rappa u need to use a style better more than the mono-sylabillic one u were using, okay it had a few different sylablle counts, but using little amount like u did, ruins the complexity fo real. An thats why u got beat so hard. even though both verses were pretty dire........no beefs....

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