I agree with Word~Perfect... It's a nice piece, good concept... trying to cool out the ignorance in the Rap game a little... but it isn't as intense as it could of been... it was really basic in structure. And you also may want to check some of your Grammar.

And as a side note: Ain't nothing conscious about Drinking Hennessey and Smoking Weed... To each their own... but for me it kinda contradicts the message some and was just not necessary. One of the main problems in Hip-Hop today is misuse of alcohol and drugs (especially when used together) and the aftermath that can come from people who are under the influence of them.

Just My Two Cents... Liked it though in general... KEEP Elevating!