Yo... on the Strength kid... this was a good look into the life of someone who's had it tough. But I agree with Liba Dee in that it wasn't a "Great" look into someone's life. It lacked the feeling son. I mean really... it's one thing to hate on your Moms, but the tone is only semi-angry... semi-hurt and so forth. I know your feelings are real... but I don't feel they are "Really" displayed here. The other thing is that the piece kinda threw me for a loop when you all of a sudden started talking to your Moms instead of about her. This can be done... but it needs a really smooth transition. And in my honest opinion I didn't see one.

Anyways, Keep Up The Good Work and Keep Writing Yo... Rap / Poetry can help heal the soul of all that ails it. PEACE<>