Nice Piece... I really like the concept and think that you are both great MC's.

Three Comments though:
1. Payce's verse was alot Stronger to me... way better structure. It started the piece off nice. And though Damani finished well...

2. The structure shouldn't have changed from MC to MC in my opinion... It almost seems like y'all are rocking on a different track to me. If the structure could have been maintained... this piece would've been abslute fire... if:

3. Damani's Spelling and Grammar was better. Run that joint through MS Word son and bring it back.... the mispellings make a difference to a cat like me.

Good Stuff Y'all... KEEP ELEVATING!

Just My Two Cents - PEACE <>