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Old 12-28-03, 05:20 PM   #12
TheUnderRated
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i'll break it down like i'm supposed to.......

Whoever you jam dog you sweet as them - I got a group called teks Dont make me feature them-

^not a punch not a personal....weak sexual stuff and thinkin your the shit....not battle tactics...

If you get a peice of them- you wont see the end - Plus I flatter with a Dagger Like Im Peter Pan

^ok you tryed some wordplay i respect that.....flatter with a dagger?....again no punch...more talkin about how good you r..

And your flow fucka just part of my extraz- I know Im nice Faggit- I'll say parden and Wet cha-
Fuck a lot of Ho's- Even ones that resemble carmen electra- But your Ho give enough mouth to give a Army a lecture-

^ok thats almost a punch...no personals...talkin about your girls???....talkin about his girl.....weak.......

If this was a championship game- I would get them damn rings-And if you damn scream- Ima give you damn wings-Fucka holla back for more

^simplistic flow....no punches talkin about how good you are....
filler...you wrote more than 10 thats all i'm going through....

3/10
FINEST...
I feel quite bad battlin you son, you'll gain a loss before 5 posts
I sense you've got no lyrical ability - I'm battlin WoodJohn's ghost!

^good setup the punch was kinda weak is he woodjohn if so ...then the punch hit harder but he prolly don't even know who woodjohn is..

Ya shootin blanks as usual... apparantly not only verbal slugs
I hope you'll never try audios either, peeps'll definately don plugs

^creative OK punch which is enough to take this battle on the punches category......

It's obvious you'll remain un-noticed... obviously won't make it big
I guess theres summut to help tho... maybe find a standout sig
^ kinda weak sorry i ain't feelin that as much as you may have been...

Set a time limit.. you take 10 for that weak response to the thread
Tho credit where its due... obviously you didn't pre-write instead!
^ok you prolly don't wanna give him credit in a battle at all....you coulda punched em but you complimented him......

Still, you're hardly 'Notorious', I mean just look at ya battle tally
I'm merkin' you kid, sonned straight back....back...to Cali...
^goin for a personals here i feel that the punch missed a lil but hey what are yougonna do......
6/10
vote goes to harlem.....