heres my vote........

you fuckin with the doc? let me give you a scrip/
ya gona need some medication when i bust up ya lip/
^ok a punch weak and simplistic but at least you threw it out there....
you aint got shit to touch the flow i bring/
people guard what i say, like da fellowship of the ring/
^NO!!!BOOO!!! tolkien was not a rapper leave his shit out of it...
you got no name, just a number, yeah bitch step in line/
168, im fuckin 1, so ill just leave you behind/
^ok you got a punch off on her name there it was a OK one too congrats....
you might as well cave before your chest collapses/
you betta pay ya dues to me like i was collectin taxes/
^meh played you prolly heard it before but whatever it a kinda punch...fuck ya numbered ass, ill beat you even goin first/
you all dried up, bitch i got lyrical thirst/
^simplistic but it works i call it an OK punch
who you gona call when you out on yo ass/
cuz you tired to fuck with doc, and you know you wont last/
^filler.....nothing worth mentionin
so let me give some advice before i close up my rhyme/
just shut the fuck up, you aint worth none of my time/
^weak ender...its a straight dis which came too weak
5/10.....

168
Battle this doc is simple so ima make him leave in limbo
your gonna get fucked jus like your bitch ass bimbo
^um not creative but its a punch....a weak punch....simile...
Check it your the doc but ima type you a new prescription
you should've read your lines dawg no fuckin information
^its a punch but the fact that it doesn't really ryhme kinda throws it off so i'll give you credit for another weak punch...
ten lines 5 bars your gonna leave in lyrical wast bag
get lyricaly fucked make you feel like internet fag
^BOOOO no do not use stupid fag shit like that ......nothing...
I no your whit cuz you wear Du-Rags like a member of the KKK
168 will make you 1 as in 0-1 make sure that will stick
^this doesn't ryhem at all....missed punch.....
I jus join this RB game and might get my first win
rhymes like the one you carry should be the devils sin
^thats an alright finisher usually you wanna hit harder than that..weak punch....

2/10