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Old 12-28-03, 06:01 PM   #7
PaYce
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prophacyz...ur structure is whack man, u gotta fix that, i see you pointed that out to. You gotta fix that. Even tho prophacyz verse was more creative...doc_knock did create a much better picture in my head about the point he was trying to establish. Both had nice closers even tho prophacyz was stronger in my opinion. Creativity is awarded...But the main point of a topical battle is to create a better image in the readers head about the subject...so

vote- doc_knock


Return the favour by dropping honest votes on the battles in my signature please. Thx.