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well kid... structure had me off at times... and ya bars was like... W.T.F. MATE??... I WAS CONFUSED... but kid you will get better just need a lil guidence for what you need to fix to make you better... i'm not the one to do it... i'm still elevating my self... even tho i am very gifted... but hey... everyone was just as worse are you are... don't let any cat bring down yo spirit... unless you just can't elevate... then u just need to spot... but u might have a light... i was feelin this piece tho... come back... check out some otha cats open mic's... and get the deal... good luck kid

Caesar - on3