"in cellular confinement awaiting dawn, for unlock/
Screws there to abuse, each day another bruise beaten in a corner, because my body i refused/
Every night i feel their dirty hands, i taste their evil breath/
And i cry because its all my fault, i wish God came with my death/"

Deep lines....
I was feeling this,..Reminds me of a suicidal note...I once did...
Your structure needs work...Your rhyme scheme was on point...
and it kept me wanting to read more and more...
your a deep head Liba Dee...I would like to do a collab...


Laters...