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Old 12-28-03, 07:14 PM   #13
Straight Ace
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Played concept, well executed.
Strong wordplay..everything made sense..
As for as i can see..lack of vocabulairy,
Which is perfectly understandable in this case.
A more even lined structure would've helped..
& seperatin' each bar?..unnessacerry.
Still, enjoyable.. ok read.
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