Spectator
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IP:
I got an eerie feeling once reading the last line of this. Then, I read the piece again.. and I love how you started with the word life, and ended with death. To me, that was the 'start' and 'end' to the poem.
The rest was the middle.. which highlighted in a simple yet provocative manner some of the many questions we thinkers examine over and over in our minds everyday. Why oh Why..
But, V is right.. death being the answer to these questions, only serves to raise more questions, and so the cycle continues.
Technically, written utilising a simple style, which I appreciated for the content of the piece, as I think a more elaborate one might have taken focus from the subject matter. Youve written the questions as we think them, without fancying them up.. I liked that.
Nice write Eki.
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Great spirits often encounter violent opposition from mediocre minds.
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