first of yall, nice spits to the both of yall. Now the vote:

TL-ur spit was alright but the flow was kinda choppy at times. had a lot of multis but sum of them were that good. U addin in extra syllables to them. Multis r supposed to match syllable 4 syllable. Ur punches were alright, they just didnt contain personals in them, punches are meant to be directed to the person and to do that good u need to use personals. Overall u had a decent spit but the main element of battlin is punches and u couldve dun better on ur punches.

DNF-u also had a good spit. Punches contained personals. You had some good wordplay in there. Flow was a bit choppy at times but not as choppy as TL's was at times. Overall u did pretty good but like STRIAGHT ACE said u just need some more complexity in you spit.

VOTE: DNF

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