ok...heres some feedback...after please vote on the following text battle...

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=101956

ok..i will be honest..(Havent started listening yet) if i do not feel it i shall say do not let this influence your vote in my battle..oNe..


hmmm..beat is a lil...different lol..nice..

quality..ok...intro a lil quiet

the flow is ill at the start...shit...

"None the less..None the less...
I kiss ya lips an have the taste of success"

ill metaphor...

hmm..occasionally.. ya voice sounds a lil forced but holding up with the first verse..

ok beat change..i was feelin first beat more than fabs...

ok...lol you took fabs style..nice..hahah

some nice multi's in the middle...

flow is varying..not going off but changing regularly between fab an ya own style...

nice touch..stops from gettin repetitive the time between beat changes is too long you need to shorten that an think of a clear cut way to end it but this wasnt the corny ass shit i was expecting it to be in all honesty...nice verse pretty deep an some nice lines...

special props on that 1 i quoted..illness.