yo man this was good i like your style man..ya Structure was good and ya FLow was consistant SO ya had Good Verses but i feel ya had some lines that where stretched out but nothing you can't fix in ya next piece.....ya vocab was Nice man Not bad ya used it well in ya rhymes...ya Chorus was Nice man ya Used it nicely and It suited the Topic And I wouldn't mind reading more of ya work.........Consider this Upped.....PeacE.....