Lewd
Ima call you cashues,cuz u must me nuts,
try to tell jokes,but u alway end up the butts,
pretty witty, nice, 6/10
Which is concievable cuz ur rhymes weak as hell,
they like condoms in africa,they just don't sell,
an aiight punch, 5/10
Well, young mike you just to young for the mic,
14 year old tyke,who hasn't learned to ride the ryhme bike,
not too good, because of bad wordplay, 4/10
Hypotheticaly you could beat me,if you sniffed up my lines,
but youd just sneeze them out,cuz i won with white lines,
lol, actually a nice concept, an wordplay, 7/10
killed 2 times,like a raven i found you and flew to new haven,
stealthly behavin,crept threw the house and slaugtered u bathin.
an aiight closer, not the best 5/10
overall-
27/50
jus need to keep elevatin, vocab mostly. nice drop.
Young Mike
what are you mad cause im from new haven//
im killin a 2 birds with one stone or should i say a raven//
fed off his verse, loses effect 5/10
lost twice but if i can help then three//
talk bout nuts and buts was this guy hittin on me//
another feeds, but not too bad, 6/10
you remind me of a rapest like kobe//
fuck you and your contry go warship a leaf//
didnt ryhme, wack punch, 4/10
yeah i know my line are kind of weak//
well your from canada so you cant speek//
at least it ryhmes, but still bad wordplay, horrible, 4/10
your like jay-z its your time//
half the shit you said didnt even rhyeme
very simplistic 4/10
jus keep elevatin, your verse was very simple at time, an lacked, vocab, wordplay an a decent punch.
but you had an aiight one, thats what you want all your raps to be like, try not to feed, an jus keep bein creative.
overall
Lewd
plz drop an honest vote on this battle
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