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Old 12-28-03, 09:51 PM   #16
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punches 007: watch as this herb 'falls' off, punchlines draw in 'tumble' weed// good wordplay also in this line...tag yours was aight but a little to simple

flow both: they both flowed pretty well solid throughout although tag some of your lines were stretched

metas 007: comin at me, 'quarter' like skill, i come back, an i hit 'priceless'...this was a nice line//tags..imma kill em, yo go on stage...ur shytz a comedy..this line coulda been flipped better and made more into a punch but aight meta

personals 007: battle this 10 year old, bearly able to type correct grammer,* good solid personal...but i dont understand how he'd be 10 i think he'd be 13 but good

wordplay 007: when you dream in colour its a pigment of your active imagination good line if you tink about it it makes sense

overall i think 007 took this battle

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