I agree with the above 2 posts... You really need to elevate man. There is no complexity to your form... Flow is futile... it's like you trying to battle your way out of a paper bag... but can't because you aint got no punchiness to it. Nowadays people looked to be entertained, educated and / or enlightened by a piece... this did neither for me. It sounds more like you were in a rap battle that you were losing.

So reallly, though this may sound like an attack... it's really not. I suggest you maybe attempting due some Topical stuff to build that creative side of your game.

Best Line:
You think you having me...hold it clown
I got a crew like gravity....we hold shit down

Worst Line:
stab u in the ankle....make you roll around(yeah)
Ima reckless mo'fucka....like drunk drivers

Keep Elevating - Absolutely No Hating!