Overall pretty equal as in seperate catagories..
But as this is a battle, punches & personals..win.
Both had n ok verse..pretty mediocre at points..
Eki had better structure though..
Both had decent, consistant flow through out..
Basic..
Overall i feel Eki takes this..
Ill come back & make my vote official (poll)..
Once i reach 100 posts, nearly there..

In the meanwhile Return the favour......