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Old 12-28-03, 11:44 PM   #13
menolin
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my vote straight ace


aiight, prophett you came hard wit some witty punchlines,

e.g
Like me giving him the middle finger and a smile just for fun/
Me pulling out my ak one....while he pulling out his christmas toy gun/

but like this, and the rest of your verse, it still lacks complexity, to make you punches hit that little biit harder.

an why was you rappin bout christmas so much??



but straight ace, jus took nearly every catergory, his punches were hard hittin, complex an had good wordplay.



'Jesus' ur comic ill repost this battle so u die 3 times..
Smash ya brain wit a 'crucifix' so the thought of loss..
..'crosses' your mind..
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