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Old 12-28-03, 11:47 PM   #8
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Yo that was pretty tight u wa usin multies in there and shit and thas good, I seriosly think alot of MCs on this fuckin site are way nicer lyricists then half the niggaz on the radio right now
so keep the shit up, and my advice is even when u writin somethin sensetive or real still throw in a clever punchline or 2 and get more lyricly complex like rhymin every last 2 words not jus the last

other then that nice tight shit , hope u make something out of it

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