Deuce
Cultivate your structure, those stretched bars..
Are hard to read n look immature - herbish..
As for your content, lacked solid punches & or..
Personals.. also all the other catagory's..
Wordplay etc, where hardly included.

Seven
Better structure..better punches..
More wit & creativity..
Overall, just better battle verse.
Not great, but alot better then Deuce's..

vote:Seven

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