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Old 12-29-03, 12:44 AM   #18
.::Narcotics::.
Banned: Cheating
 
Posts: 607
From: East Cokeland
IP:

aite..breakdown...

jezus dont im me..

My smart spitting is hard hitting....yo shit bore-me
I dont gotta try,casue yo corny lines...gon win this battle for-me
^^uhh average for a newb
This geek is out of my league....wit his weak vo-cab
U dont even got the basics.....like a boxer wit no-jab
^^played
This prick think he got skill....cause he can rhyme a few words
Jacka gets shit on by MCs...more then parked cars by birds
aite ////lol

This kid claims he got game but u spittin for no reason..
its obvious ill get the win cuz your a wak version of jezus..

not bad use of his name..sorta like his opener tho..

leave this rap shit alone cuz my flowz are suicidal..
ya punches fallen short like midget ski divers..
^^ nice punch heard it sum where before tho..dont no were

im a fire starter.heat i continusly blasted it..
the way i author flames like books of matches..

nice use of wordplay.....hmm filler...atleast the first line was

its tragic cuz my words are so deadly u losing ya health..
U bouta receive a L so just unfasten ya belt..
Lol.........

cuz ya verse is seekin for help.just sum nursery rhymes..
this kids spits the same shit about moms seventy times..
sum aite wordplay an mutlies...

my heavenly rhymes arent easy to contain..
cuz ya 0-0 record is bout to be stained..

hmmm i guess..its a closer.


both were aite....u both need to elevate...But

Jacka took it for that ski diver line..

i have spoke