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Old 12-29-03, 01:25 AM   #21
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Lyrical Jezus
My smart spitting is hard hitting....yo shit bore-me
I dont gotta try,casue yo corny lines...gon win this battle for-me

Good Personall.... Hard hittin punch

This geek is out of my league....wit his weak vo-cab
U dont even got the basics.....like a boxer wit no-jab
Good Punch

This prick think he got skill....cause he can rhyme a few words
Jacka gets shit on by MCs...more then parked cars by birds

Aightt..kinda played

This merkin is on!....cause when I drop this bomb
They gon find Jacka in the same hole they found Saddam

Weak

Winning Verbally,physicly,telapathicly...it dont matter how
After this,I have the readers scream the same thing I had yo moma scream....WOW!

Played....Weak....BOOO
OVERALL= 15/20



Jacka
This kid claims he got game but u spittin for no reason..
its obvious ill get the win cuz your a wak version of jezus..

A lil played... ok punch

leave this rap shit alone cuz my flowz are suicidal..
ya punches fallen short like midget ski divers..

Lol... wordplay

im a fire starter.heat i continusly blasted it..
the way i author flames like books of matches..

...mmmmhmmmmm.

its tragic cuz my words are so deadly u losing ya health..
U bouta receive a L so just unfasten ya belt..

DOPE ... straight punch

cuz ya verse is seekin for help.just sum nursery rhymes..
this kids spits the same shit about moms seventy times..

Personal... straight poppin

my heavenly rhymes arent easy to contain..
cuz ya 0-0 record is bout to be stained..

I think he meant substaind....But i got what he meant... nice punch
Overall.....15.5/20
Both came a lil weak......
But i thought jacka edged it just barely
His flow was a lil better....

Vote-Jacka
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