"See i'm the PaYce car so you constantly stay behind me....
when i disgrace with one bar lil head plz don't mind me..."
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the underated's opener

-kind of obvious, and kind of weak-


"Your overrated punk...Just another one of dem RB cheaters,
Even those ur verse stunk...Dickriders helped u beat Meters!"
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paYce's opener

- decent punch, vocab was lower level, this was half punch half personal-
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you stumblin i mean text be falling off my screen....
New to the RB and pissed you ain't got a team....
Where you from son guess your ass don't even know...
got em on the run too scared to fill any lines in his bio...
course your name is a punchline its from dawsons creek...
by capitalizing part your name don't mean your game ain't weak..
I read your shit literally worplay won't no one get fuck i'm about....
i mean mine cause even if i heimliched your ass you wouldn't spit that shit out....
i'll "
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the underated's whole mid section
-this all seemed like filler to me, I was sort of feelin' the dawson's creek punch.....keep elevatin' dog-

I dont care what your record says...U aint no special creature,
been on here for 20 days...n still labelled...Mcdonalds Cleaner!
always under-neath them bleachers...u cant get a higher-ratin
So u asked out a teacher...to hide its the herbs u been datin!
ill status fakin...couldnt b high rated even wit a canibus pound
couldnt get the crown...so he lied and made up the MC town!
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paYce's whole mid section

-this had a good amount of punches.....and a personal or two
I was feelin' most of these lines...but some of the vocab could have been better put.-
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i'll take this shit picture finish you think only ahead by a hair...
think you kept pace but things in the rearview are closer than they appear.....
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the underated's finisher
-sorta played out, and punched weak.....I feel this is where you lost my vote.-

you came soft at me...like a tank in the field without ammunition
Before facin me, I think you should of stopped by the Technician!
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paYce's finisher
-not the best closer.....but better than underated's.....since I'm new I don't know what that last line meant...but it doesn't change my mind....-


VOTE-paYce
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now come vote on my battle

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