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Old 12-29-03, 07:26 AM   #10
Dev
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both had some ok parts in thier verse...but both lacked abit.....4, had a niuce way with words..but lost me in places with the structure....and i dont mean cos its in paragraph.....bio....thought your lines fell short a bit and abrupt in places... also you didnt show the vocab as much....but on the whole as a collab it was ok...nuthin special but nuthin shit....pZ
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