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TL-nice spit, again u really didnt have personals, but u still came hard wit ur punches. Had some nice multis and shit in there. Overall u had a good battle.
YG-not really a good spit. It was very basic and not put 2gether well. Paragraph form is not a good way ta write battles. Look at TL's verse, he went line by line. Thats how to set it up. Ur punches were very hard hittin and at times played out. Overall u had a basic spit and need ta work on it and elevate. But im in a good mood right now lol so ill offer to help u elevate. Just cheCc my profile and get my shit or PM and ill help u out as much as i can.
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