eki--
not much there, some rhymes werent perfect. i can tell its your first...not bad, but could have used some more straight punches.
marvel--
not fantastic, but there were a few good things. the forte line was good, and the " Im dissin this person who abreviates his name, Cuz he's half a man no explanation for his game." punch was pretty good.
vote -- Marvel
please, return the favor, end my battles so i can get on with it--
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=101943
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